The movement is working. |
Since we brought together 16 of the world's best entrepreneurs to help everyday founders chase their dreams, the feedback has been incredible. Real advice from people who've actually built billion-dollar businesses. |
This week, Dan Martell, Bryan Johnson, and Roxie Nafousi reviewed three more pitches.
Each founder walked away with exactly the insight they needed to level up. |
Click to watch the pitches. |
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Dan Martell Stops A Pitch Mid-Sentence |
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This dad and son team stepped up with their clothing brand idea. You could feel their belief in the concept, but something was off in how they presented it. |
"We're thinking about putting together..." "We'd love your help to maybe make the dream come true..." |
Dan Martell caught it immediately. "There's certain words people use that presuppose failure. You said 'we're thinking about.'" |
His advice was direct: stop talking like you're unsure and start talking like it's already happening. "Pretend like you're six months in the future and it's done." |
The founders have real passion for their idea. They just needed to match their language to their conviction. |
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Bryan Johnson Redesigns A Business Model |
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The coach pitched his fasting guidance service with genuine intention to help people improve their health through better eating habits. |
Bryan Johnson listened and immediately saw a bigger opportunity. "I would make this very personal. I would create a group of people that fast together." |
The coach was focused on individual sessions. Brian was thinking community transformation. |
"Call it something like fasting with friends and stamp it out in the world where it's a social endeavor." |
In one response, Bryan handed him a new business model, a name, and a path to scale. The kind of insight that usually takes months to develop. |
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Roxie Nafousi Loves The Mission But Wants Clarity |
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This founder has an incredible personal story. She overcame depression, anxiety, and addiction, and now wants to help others do the same through consciousness work. |
Roxie Nafousi’s reaction was immediate enthusiasm. "I love her mission, I love she's got a story behind it." |
But then came the crucial feedback: "I don't really know what she does. I don't know what her sessions include." |
The founder had the credibility and the passion. She just needed to translate her story into a clear value proposition that people could understand and act on. |
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The value of getting feedback from entrepreneurs at this level is enormous. They've evaluated thousands of pitches and can spot exactly what needs to shift. |
Each founder now has a specific direction for improvement instead of guessing what might work. |
That's the power of getting your idea in front of people who've built successful businesses themselves. |
What would Dan, Brian, and Roxie have spotted in your pitch? |
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